Another poem of yours that I can relate to well. This one is going on my favorites! )
Again, if it pleases you, you are welcome to read and review my poetry.

I love this. I'm fascinated by eyes... and you can always tell.. well, I can anyway.. just by looking at someones eyes how much they've been through. I guess that's why they say the eyes are the windows into our souls. Very great piece. I like the bit at the end.

that was really good and precise- i really liked it