Great job. I really like this one; it's lighter than your other pieces =) Not, of course, that they aren't just as good. This one is just a nice change.

So far I like this poem the best, I like it alot, I'm not sure why. Hope you find that love.
~Diane

Hopeless romantic or not that poem is wonderful. Its very vivid and thats good, thats what a poem is supposed to be like. When reading you poem its like your there in that place in time listening to the words that tell of all what is being felt. The words in you poem just pop off the page. Whoever the girl turns out to be she will be one lucky girl.