that good i love it.by the way this is misty. And shawn whent up to wako and i am sad.

wow! i can soo relate! well-played, a violin is one of the most amazing sounds. ofc, when u just start out, its worse than anything! yeah. i love playin my violin, i soo agree with the poem.

This just has an era feel to it, like something one would find in a book of poetry from some famous poet. Good work.
And just so you know, you're making me blush with all your reviews.
-LSL

First off, thanks so much for reviewing all of my stuff. And secondly: this was great. The good thing about your stuff is that it's so short but you manage to make it mean something. It's simple, which is good.

Goldsha is right. They're small servings that are very characteristic in themselves, kind of like sushi. Now that's an amusing thought! Sushi poems.

you write such cute (don't get offended...i'm a girl...cute applies to everything...) little poems! they're so amusing...methinks that you should elaborate a bit more in general, though.