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On the Mantle Piece
xHannahx
2004-08-16 . chapter 1
cool! i have all kindsa things on my mantlepiece. obv. urs is tidier!
but yeah, lovely homey-feelin little poem.
~xHannahx~
vturnip
2004-03-28 . chapter 1
I like this poem. It seems like there is more to be said. I suppose it is the 1st stanza was balanced with the ryhme and the 2nd stanza was not. It is cute and light and enjoyable.
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