fascinating in its imagery.
Um... i got a favor, what the heck was my old email addy? i changed it and now i've completely forgotten what it was. Review one of my poems and tell me what it was if u could.
Will

hey!
luv this poem gurl! the metaphors are awesome, and i liked the bits about vanilla rain and the Chesire cat. nice touch there. The whole thing had a kind of daydreamish type element. anywayz, i gotta run, got 2 english papers to finish *glares at evil teacher* check out some of my new stuff if u get a chance, Twilight, Wolfsong, and The Tiger in particular. :) Keep writing,
~KS

Hey Girl!
By far this is my favorite of your poems! I love the part about the Cheshire cat :D Keep rockin!

intersting and funny. good write.

GO CHLOE!!GO CHLOE!!ha ha! awesome girl...really good! is that what really happens when ur pretty eyes are closed? God bless and lots of luvs!