"As a matter of fact, I am a bastard. I had no father when I was born." LOL That part was funny!. . .I'm gonna have to start a quote page in my bio! I haven't been on this website in so long!

Yeah, make the chapters longer, will ya?... OH! 'Manda here (the one who reveiwed your "Chitown's Anime" something on FF.net) reveiwin'! Oh, could you PLEASE review one of my fics here? "At least you will die together" Damn that guy's evil! Okay, getting WAY too out-there... CALM DOWN, DAMN IT! Oh! v-v I'm talking to myself again... DAMN IT! OH! ^-^ Continue this soon, Kenshina!

Ok, good story except for a few things. One, the chapters are way too short! Could you elaborate on things? Make them more detailed? Also, I know that you probably are doing it to try and add to the story, but -please- DON'T use the mix of Japanese/English. It just doesn't work, and gets confusing. Well...that's it for now, and I'll be looking for the next chapter. ^^