It's good. I like it, I can't do any better or i could offer you some adivice on how it could may be improved. But it's still good. At least i believe so. n_n

Good poem. A little disturbing, but as long as you aren't really suicidal, it's fine. It doesn't take much to make it sound good. It already sounds good.

Amazing. I can totally relate on all levels. I lost a loved one and felt...well...like that.

Nice poem... but I never really knew you really were *that* depressed about him... o.O Well, a really sad poem, but it's beautiful...maybe Xzerinieah was right, but that part didn't bother me...the rose thing was nice ^_^ the gun thing was extremely sad...really, really, really sad... *huggles* Don't you die on me *sniffles* ^_^
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Nice job, however--you might disagree, but anyway--i didn't like one part, the
"They begin filling it in.
I throw a single rose in
along with it"
The two consecutive "in"s at the end of the lines made me lose track of the rhythm of the poem. Maybe you could combine the latter lines or something.
Could you review some of my works sometime? Flame me, if you want to.