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SugaredNihilism 2007-03-25 . chapter 5
Um, I love you? I wish that you'd continue, this is a great story!
Pink Raine 2006-08-26 . chapter 5
you really need to finish this. it's incredibly beautiful. like a fairytale. and i'm very desperate for the rest of this story.
Kaggr 2006-03-19 . chapter 1
I think you said that his hair was silver/white a little too much...I'm also very confused as to who everyone is...like there was a couple of chapters that I skipped over. Very nice writing otherwise though.
Oki3xDoki3 2005-10-13 . chapter 5
I love your story to death...although i can't understand summuv it. dang...oh well i think i fell in love with Rinan...ahaha ♥
Lucifer's Sonata 2005-09-18 . chapter 3
I'm really regretting not having noticed this story before!! it's soo great! but OMGOSH! you killed Sechs?!! he was such a sweetie!! and the whole death scene confused me because i didn't even realized he wanted to die lol But oh wow...i certainly cried during that part *sobs some more* anyways! time to read more!
Kat 2005-09-18 . chapter 5
A beautiful, surreal, incredibly sad, incredibly sweet story. Not many things can make me cry- and I mean VERY few things can make me cry- and this is one of them. Your style is beautiful and I honestly can't find a single error. That's something else I don't often do- give rave reveiws. But heaven help me, you've got some powerful talent.
AethraZip 2005-09-12 . chapter 2
You use Cirque du Soleil's songs a lot... 4I'm the same way with opera. I've quoted 'In questia reggia' and 'Un bel di vedremo' so many times it's not funny.

Anyway, only thing I noticed is that sometimes your syntax seems a little-- off. Nothing particularly noticable, just sometimes I'll read a sentence, pause, read it again, and it won't seem right. (Too tired to be very helpful tonight. Forgive me.)
AethraZip 2005-09-12 . chapter 1
I finally got around to reading this, and now I'm kicking myself for not reading it earlier. It's great, like all your writing. Um.. I'll try to write a more helpful review next time.
anonymous 2005-09-05 . chapter 5
I really hope you update soon. I love this story. It is really good. ^^
Cute Little Mongoose 2005-08-31 . chapter 5
ah! i hate u horible horible ending.i'm so sad at u! i'm gona poke u when i see unext wekkend or whatver.ok well bye lov...no wait never mind. i don't like u and more k.well.bye.^.^
Hopes Forgotten 2005-08-29 . chapter 5
Awws, it's so sad! I hope this story ends well, although knowing you it probably won't =/

Oh well, I can't wait for the next update regardless =)
afk 2005-08-29 . chapter 5
woow you haven't updated in soo long, tis is fun thoioug hi still don't get a few thing bu i time i will ^^ keep updatig!
poetic abortion 2005-05-22 . chapter 2
amazing, simply amazing. the writing is just top knotch and really breathtaking. love how you portray each character and give it life almost. lovely, really truly lovely and quite angsty.

!~* noelle *~!
poetic abortion 2005-05-22 . chapter 1
a fascinating start, reallt enjoyed this so far. the characters seem rather sexy and a bit mysterious, lovly start and I can't wait to read more. ^_^

!~* noelle *~!
Clairvoyant 2004-12-16 . chapter 4
BE-utiful! Sad but beautiful. update soon if its not completed already!
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