Wow, another good story...update soon though...

The only thing that makes me annoyed is that each section wasn't longer...but we always have the next chapter I guess. Just to clear eveything up this goes from Antonio & Anna in the present (antonio is lovely, as I've said before), then to the Marines arrival and exploration of this certainly foul place (or so I'm sure they will find out soon enough, *cackles*) to finding out what happened to ickle Carlos. Wonderful dear. Although I have no clue what they said in spanish, I have a dirty mind so I was thinking the worst.

Oh specky! Very disturbing, very good I love it although it is slightly confusing

I really liked this chapter acan't wait to see who the woman is. If you get the chance you should update freedom I really love that story so far.

Oh, new chapter! I like the last paragraph. Very intriguing.

Wow...I don't care what you said about disliking this chapter. I like it most of all so far. It's brilliant, to the point, the language is wonderful!

please keep updating i love this story. And please update the hunted i wanna know what happens!

ohh well done! keep it up!

:) I really liked this chapter. Keep posting can't wait to hear what happens next.

I owe you an apology. This chapter was brilliantly done. You created an eerie, tense atmosphere, which captured my full attention. I like the flashbacks. They're scary. Especially the ones where she's alone. I think that's a fear that everyone can relate to.
Well done. :)

*bites nails* Great chapter!

I'm very much positive in the liking of Antonio. I want to know what she saw reflected. I want monsters and gore in the next chapter, even body parts, perhaps? yes.

Oh my God! I love this chapter! Better yet, this story. Hope you write more soon. Only one thing to criticise and that was the confusion I got with the jumping from past to present but I think that was me being retarded and not reading properly at the start.

Otherwise yay!

you are one mean person ending a chapter like that with nothing more to read (meaning behind the words: i really like to read your story wright more) :)

I like this chapter more than the first one. Good building up of tension - it's more of a horror now. I have a tiny suggestion... When you go into a flashback, try using italics or leaving a bigger gap between the flashback paragraph and the present.