Reviews for Pretty for the Sake

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i-see-faeries 2008-12-02 ch 9,	Aw, how cute. I love this. I felt it was a little unbelievable, but suspended disbelief right? Great job!
Saint Anger 2007-11-23 ch 9,	aww, i'm disappointed to find this is the last chapter posted. i quite like this story. androgynous boys are yummy... though it seems nathan is a little bit out of character in this last chapter. he didnt seem like the vindictive type before. anywho i'd like to see more of this posted.
Back of Beyond 2007-09-16 ch 9,	Interesting story, can't wait for the next update. :]
merrymowmow 2007-09-09 ch 9,	I was wondering when you're going to update?
looloof 2007-06-08 ch 9,	Why is Nate sounding more and more like a fourteen year old girl??!!
The Mumbling Sage 2007-06-04 ch 9,	Have to leave a quick reivew now but the one thing that really stands out in this chapter is that Nathan really isn't as nice as he used to be- I can't imagine Nathan from the other chapters calling anybody a '**', no matter how jealous he was of her.
ddz008 2007-06-02 ch 9,	Great chapter! They're so sweet with each other :) Such a nice couple. I hope your trip to Japan is awesome. Hope to hear from you soon!
lilylupin7 2007-06-02 ch 9,	Cute chappy
SwitchVale 2007-06-01 ch 9,	aww! I fear if those freaky model chicks are going to try anythingt...but their reolationship is developing so wonderfully! and very realistically, like I could imagine walking down the street and suddenly seeing Paris and Nathan
Keiko Yuki 2007-06-01 ch 9,	OMG you finally updated! Great stuff, as always. I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work and may tbe next chapter come sooner prays.
Lady E 2007-06-01 ch 9,	How cute! It's good to see the two of them taking mature steps in furthering their relationship. Have fun in Japan!
Lady E 2007-01-20 ch 8,	Nice ending last chapter. Making bets on your children? On one hand, I wish more parents could be that light-hearted. On the other hand, it's a little disturbing. "Goodnight, Moon" is the best. :) I haven't fully combed through your profile yet, so I'm not sure if you were planning on reworking this. I throw my support behind it of course. There are some fantastic ideas here, and if you revised it, slowing down the plot and building their relationship a little differently, it would come together beautifully. Whenever you find the time. Good luck!
The Mumbling Sage 2006-09-09 ch 7,	I think I've laughed myself sick twice...no, three times since chapter 4. First with the vegetarian revelation, then with the reference to the Britney Spears song, now with this 'bet'... I like how you detail even the family's dinner habits, altough some of the dialouge in this chapter seemed a little forced- Paris talking about his father, mainly.
The Mumbling Sage 2006-09-09 ch 4,	Well, dispite the fact that the premise is a little...strange...it all comes togeather and seems really realistic. I like how your story is detailed, and the emotions and setting and feel of the story manage to blend togeather so perfectly.
Lidyah 2006-09-07 ch 8,	It's not a very serious story - which I like, because sometimes it's nice to read a light hearted story. From the beginning you knew that Paris liked Nate more than he "should" - but they got together really fast - which was odd. However I do like how they're getting to know each other. It's sweet.

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