Ooh! Marvelous, Carrie! Once again, your words amaze me! ::grins::
This is definitely one of the best things I've ever read from you! So dark...and so wonderful... Just know, if you keep writing, I'll keep reading!

i can feel your raw emotion which your sew together well into a flowing poem, wonderful. i connect to this poem as well
sarah wild
p.s feel free to review any of my writing!

Amazing. Incredible. Beautiful. You have an awesome talent, this poem reflects your unbelievable talents as a writer. Please keep it up.

I know how this one feels; it took me...three, four months to get over it. You have talent; I think you really captured the feeling of being shut out well.

Thank you for your review first of all.
You write really well. Your expressiveness and emotions will take you a long way.
Keep writing please.
I love new talent.
Love SheBeastie

just...amazing, awesome stuff.