Fluff, Fluff, Fluff. This is truly one of my favorite poems of yours. It is exquisite and frankly, it sounds like it actually happened. I am sure you have shown me this before, but I'm not sure - truthfully. It is a good poem that expressed the narrators views and thoughts fully. Props!
Genine**

This is moving. Really moving...I've been in that position before...and now we're dating...

I think this poem is very well expressed. You did a very good job at expressing yourself. I found myself practically relating to every single line you wrote.. so it was moving and meaningful. I think you really captured the feelings longing and not being able to control who you love incredibly well. I could tell it was very genuine. My only criticism is that you could come up with more interesting words and interesting metaphors to captivate the reader with. I mean, I think it's very well expressed as it is, but it's nice to use poetic devices to get across your point too. But, I think it's a very well expressed and genuine poem. Good Job.