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| strwbrrylovr 2005-02-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseThere were only a few parts in the story where the grammar wasnt right but usually you're able to figure out what is meant to be said. I cant wait for you to make the next one...which I hope will be soon! |
| Chavi West-Wind 2004-10-03 ch 7,  | abuseM...Ame sounds yummy. :d *licks lips* Hee... Sorry, I thought it was cute. Poor Kumori though, isn't that how it always goes? Someone always gets pushed aside and no matter how good everyone's intentions are, they always know when someone's trying not to hurt their feelings. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter! |
| Charcoal Angel 2004-06-20 ch 6, | abuseOOH~! Fantabulous! I cant wait to read more, its shaping up to be very interesting indeed ^_^ WAHOO! -Liney- |
| Cat 2004-06-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseHmm hmm hmm, lots of broken information, the kind that doesn't make sense until later. But that's good, it makes for suspense. Suspense is good for you. It makes you healthy as a tree! Except for trees that are dying, because they're not healthy... ._.;; |
| Black Rose 2004-06-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseplease make the next chapter, this is getting really good! please??!?!!?!?!?!?! |
| Black Rose 2004-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abusehm. I just be doing this character ting I guess...hm...hope it okays... Name: Vespera Tsonomee Age: 16 Personality: More to herself, searched for her true love, shy, can be a little angry if bothered by a she likes for she tries to hide her feelings. Looks: long black hair with blue streaks, lavendar eyes, well curved, tall, thin, Magic: Able to heal, can read minds and teleports people, and stuff like thats, can use water in any way Being: Water Fairy |
| line 2004-06-12 ch 5, anon. | abusewhoo! im in it! *twirl* cant wait for the next chappie! |
| Chavi West-Wind 2004-06-05 ch 4, | abuseWoah, just noticed this. Bad me. Oh well. Nice, nice, nice. Waiting for more. Which I probably won't see until we're settled at the new house. ...Screw you u_u; |
| Charcoal Angel 2004-05-31 ch 4, | abuseWhoo! Another chapter! I cant wait till i come in *grins* Awesome job, a bit hard to understand, because its mostly dialogue, butyou get used to it ^_^ love, liney |
| Charcoal Angel 2004-04-27 ch 3, | abuseYaya! Im so happy a new chappies up; I can't wait for the next! It's so addictive! *latches herself to heath* |
| Chavi West-Wind 2004-04-25 ch 3, | abuseLookie lookie, someone likes me! And I wanna know what my deal is! Y'd think I'd know, being me and all - BUT I DON'T! HAHA! JOKES ON ME! ...waitaminnit... |
| Charcoal Angel 2004-04-23 ch 2, | abuseYAY! It's soo good so far! Slightly confusing with all the names in the beginning, but it was funny! I can't wait to read more! *huggles* |
| Eagle Seance 2004-04-17 ch 2, | abuseInteresting! Funny too! i like ur characters- esp. jyotika. Keep going! :) |