I really like this piece, particularly because I can relate to it so well. This is a a beautiful metaphor though from a writing standpoint it gets a bit jumbled near the middle, though it comes together in the last statement whihc is pure beauty.
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Impressive. Havn't seen someone look at it like that.

This is very good, and I like the metaphors used. Thanks for reviewing me and the amswer to your question- somewhat. It is loosely based on some things that have happened to me, and thoughts that have occured to me. Thanks again for reviewing... I'll check some more of your writing later (no time right now.) Keep it up! ;)
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Excellent. Great use of metaphors.