Ahh! The poor bird! I think the moral of the story is that birds need to carry shotguns! ^__^ I love fables, though. It was interesting to read.

A newer portrayal of an old moral. Good work.

^__^ It's really an interesting fable. I think perhaps it would sound more fable-like if you had the old wise crow advising the younger one against eating the corn. Also, that part where the young crow asks "why do we not feed," he asks the same question twice, it's sort of redundant. But I kinda' like this fable. It sounds a lot like the old Aesops that I used to read. :3