Update, please?? It's such a fun story! I really want to see how it goes. :)

So, you totally stole Kharrigan's name. Shame on you.

...Wicksie-poo?

Is Kharrigan's job really really worse than poop? Perhaps this is hyperbole.

Some of the wordings are a wee bit awkward, and I find that your usual character development is not really present. Alas.

wow i love this story! i've enjoyed reading all your others too. i really cant wait to see what happens next!

Kharrigan is crazy. But cool. Update soon, please!

um... okay then.

AHAHAHAHA! I love your writing style...hm...
i just noticed. It's a little like mine, only funnier. hehe.
Loved the chapter! And Kharrigan is hilarious! *huggles* Update soon please!

something I forgot about ch2- if they number off 1-9, that means there'll be nine groups of 5. I think you wanted them to number off by fives, so there'll be five groups of 9. Make sense?

The main character is so liek you, Thea! It's kinda scary. ANyway- really good and really different from past stories- whichi is good. ttyl

haha...wonderful work. I can tell this is going to be fun! I love it already! Keep writing, you! *glomps*

haha...this sounds really funny. *puppy dog eyes* a little romance? please? i don't care with who...just someone under 50, please ^^...
ahem. anyway, great beginning. it sounds hilarious...keep writing!