Hey-
Poor Jerry. Short, but for effective. Nice work.

In so few words, I actually ended up caring (so to speak) about the character. Good job.

I'm coolyay.

This is a good story man. Very short. Try to write longer, develope your characters more. That's the only thing I have to say.

That is digusting.
Plus how could the knife split his head in half? I mean, it would have to be a VERY strong and sharp knife to cut through skull. Plus the killer would have to have a very strong arm to do it. The first line "I'm Gonna be Dead No" makes it sound like a spoof, not a serious thing that ends with someone's head being split in half. This isn't a story, it's someone's morbid imagination on the internet. Sorry, I don't like it.