I wish I could see that. Your writing makes it possible for me.

Did this use any literary techniques?
I don't know anything about poetry.(robinson is such a bad teacher) It seems to simple to be a good poem. (But what do i know?)

i must say i enjoy this poem-it fits the bill of seeming to carry sincere emotion about the topic, but it is not a haiku-it's a tanka form. haiku did arise from this form but they aren't the same unless you are doing linked verse and it just uploaded strangely.
keep writing-seeing something besides universal struggle and miserable love is a relief