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Telor 2004-07-08 . chapter 1
Slightly disturbed but delightfully dark. Well written to boot.
Lan-sama 2004-03-31 . chapter 1
Lan-sama: W00t. Something depressing! Not that its good for th' Kai-chan to be depressed, but it certainly is...
Flynt: ...refreshing... >.>
Yasashii: ...scary... o.o
Sybil: ...sad... ;_;
Ruckora: ...pancakes! ^_^
Everyone: ...?
-The odd monk sits there, legs laid out before him, munching away at some hot cakes.-
Lan-sama: ...eh... Ruckora? Have you been futzing around with my Mythril Lego Railgun?
Ruckora: I den't know what yer blabbin aboot... but thems some damn good cakies, yesh they are.^_^
Flynt: Your world must be a very happy place...
Sybil: On with the review. The writing was excellant, and unusually high in imagery.
Yasashii: Agreed. As the cheif said, you did well to portray the darker side of your thoughts, a part of you I think I like.
Sybil: As usual, the sentence structure was perfect, flowing as easily as possible for such a touchy subject.
Yasashii: Yes... very interesting. You catch the reader before he/she has a chance to escape.
-Lan-sama sits there with Ruckora and Flynt, staring at the two females with utter abandon-
Lan-sama: ...Im starting to understand what you said about the whole 'charries knowing more than I' thing.
-He shrugs, before standing and bringing the Kikuichimonji over a shoulder, tapping it to the shoulder of a familiar dragon hoodie.- Welp. Time to declare war on my superiors.
Ja!
~Lan-sama~
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