Oh my god, this should be my theme poem. Our deepest desires always come easier at night. I've felt this way many times.

swet very cool poem. I love poetry, i also love stories, but sometimes there not worth reading, lol. Got any good stories that you've writen and would want my opinion on, let me know and I will be there! keep up the good work! _

This is a REALLY good poem. It's creepy and romantic all in one little piece. Seems like everyone has at least one poem like that. Very interesting. Awesome job!
Cirien Phoenix
P.S. You're welcome for all the reviews. Also thank you for the review on "I Loved Your Death."

Very cool. Great use of imagery!

This poem really connects to me in ways. I love it. It'll keep me thinking for a little while...

Beautiful and oh so true

Whoa. That's really very beautiful. Wow. I'm amazed. I love it so very much.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

wow...powerful...left me with a weird tightness in my chest. extremely intense...i like!

hey, tres cool. Some very good imagery, love the soft as a rose petal brushed with dew bit. You really capture the mood and feelings which is hard so well done.
Keep up good work!
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It's very classly and deep.I loved it so much.