Reviews for Teenage Storyland

Zat
2004-03-31
ch 1,

I agree with the Frodo dude. Sucks it does not. Is good, good enough for me anyways. Of course I'm just a crazy kid with too much time on his hands...but hey, who's countin?

Frodo
2004-03-30
ch 1,

I really enjoyed this. You captured a nice bit of teenage angst. (Is it possible to have 'nice' and 'angst' in the same sentence? *shrugs*) I especially like your closing. It's a very nice way to end it... I mean, plus it's your title of the work..
I have one more thing to say though. Don't write 'this sucks (or worse yet sux)' for a summary. If you want people to read this and review, it's best not to tell people that it's crap. Who really wants to read something that sucks? Secondly, I don't know why a person would post stuff on the site if they know it sucks. You want to put your best work on here to get reviews. Maybe you have some alterier (sp) motive though... whatever. I just thought I'd comment on that.
It didn't suck, so yes, I suggest changing the summary a bit.
-Frodo

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