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Alice's Hourglass 2004-03-30 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Very sad, too...I enjoyed
the part about "when I look in the mirror, I see your face." I can feel how trapped the speaker in the poem feels.
The phrase "haunted me down" is slightly awkward. Did you mean hunt?
Very well written. I look forward to reading more of your stuff =)
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