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| Ultimate Schuyler 2004-12-15 ch 1,   | >_< Headaches bad. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-08 ch 1, | hum yup yup. know what youre talking about... nice portrayal of it though ;) |
| picturesandpills 2004-05-28 ch 1, | i think it's wonderful how you use the haiku to discribe your title, i would do more of those if i were you. However, this wasn't my favorite, i don't think the first line got my attention as much as it should have. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-04-10 ch 1, | Hey- Very good haiku. Has a nice flow to it, and I like it. |
| Sir Miles 2004-04-06 ch 1, | Very nice! I liked how you didn't concentrate on the headache itself, but rather the influence it has on thinking (or not wanting to think!). --Sir Miles |
| Dracula, Lord of the Vampir... 2004-04-01 ch 1, | I know what you mean. Good description. |
| Angel Snowson 2004-03-30 ch 1, | Never seen it put that way, but I like it. Hope to see more works. |