 A.D Williams 2004-06-04 . chapter 1First off, awesome pen name, secondly, JtHM is awesome! and finally, great poem. You can just see a person sitting there recollecting in thought, and then a mirrage fading from in front of them as they embrace the past. Simply beautiful.
-Amber |
 aiur 2004-03-30 . chapter 1hey you wrote that really long poem that had everything to do with cutting, didn't you? it just adds so much depth and emotion to everything you write. i really loved it! course, i never mention anything like you do 'cause my friends would freak out and on and on ... and i just don't want to deal with the outcry. but i admire you, for being brave enough to bare that to the world. 'cause i know when i ... well ... i don't want to show anyone. i don't want them to know. it's like my own private cry my own guilt my own frustration that stains the ground. beautiful poetry, though, and really haunting. good job!! do me a favour and check out something i've written plz??
~k8 |