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| TechnicolorPants 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseooh, that's pretty dark. 0.o But good! |
| Harvestress Of Sorrow 2004-08-04 ch 1, | abuseWow... That has the whole shock-poetry going on, doesn't it? The imagery is very well done... Perhaps a few metaphors would've added to the general feel of it. "The blood spatters, creating blood-red roses on my thigh" or something like that. Oh wait--I want that now! *steals back previous example* Mine! ~Tegan |
| g21lto 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very good poem -- expresses the emotions and imagery well. That being said I think it would be better off in the poetry section. But it was very good nevertheless. |
| girl-23 2004-04-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. Good. I've felt that way more than once. Really good. Laura |