aw! that was brilliant. Loved the title!

DANG! I liked the first few stanzas, then when they started to get longer I was kinda upset it didn't follow the same pattern. But then the last part that starts on 'but my problem is' on down, was TIGHT, especially the end. I get it now, dang that's just cool. Keep up the good work.
Ja ne
D-sythe
"You think so too right?"