This is the kind of poem for someone to WOW with. We all know that a storm is a VERY NEGATIVE thing. But you made it something POSITIVE. Great work. :x

this has a wonderful, almost stately feel to it, like standing on the edge of a cliff, holding your arms out, and proclaiming your acceptance of the drenching storm. *smiles* lovely goodness.

I like the way that you made a storm into something positive. You used some really great symbolism. Well done.

Wow. This is a level or two above my comprehension, but it is very nice.

this is awesome: very inspiring and symbolistic, i luv symbolism, great one

Amaing. Beautifully written, descriptions are perfect.
Well done
-Carrie

Very nicely writen. I didn't see anything to comment on. Great job.

wow.. great descriptions and powerful words and very nicely written! awesome poem

you know what i'm going to say so i'm not gonna say it...but it was sorta cool other than that.
sorry for the lack of sense but, again, i woke up about 2 minutes ago. ^.^

This is awesome, i love all of the metaphores with the blakness of the sky and the wings and the storm. This is an amazing poem and I love it!