Wow...this was really good. Sad...but very well written. I like how you described everything...it's very deep. Anyways, I loved it and I hope you continue this. Keep up the great job! ^_^

Wow, this looks like it'll be really good, so if you please, keep writing it and update soon.

nice one! i really do liked it...
u hav the talent most of us here wants
to have...
keep up the good work!
hope u'd have the tym to read some of
my works too!
hav a nice day!

hi,
its laura, author of tables turned. you reviewed my story and suggested i read one of yours, so here i am! i liked this. a little depressing, but in a powerful way, which was good. i like the bit about the friend who would cut herself...very realistic, and the way you compared the two addictions was nice.
anyways, keep up the great work! and thanks again for reviewing my story...
-laura
PS: hehehe...we have the same name, we're both 18 (well, i'm 19 in less then a month), and we're both canadian...how wierd is that!?

wow! Thats amazing! It sounds exactly like a relationship I had only mine was mental abuse more than physical. I did cut myself and burn myself partly because i hated myself(he made me feel so worthless) ajd partly because the pain and the blood were a comfort to me. Also I did drugs, everything from weed to crystal meth (dont EVER EVER EVER do meth, it really ** you up)if u go to my sight and read my poem 'callous' it was written about this guy and how much I hate him now and want to see him suffer the way I did.I am really touched by this story though. Good job

This is very well written. I don't know if you did any research or anything.. but it sure sounds like it
you've nailed the narrator's voice
writing in first person is usually really hard to do well, but this piece flows naturally and actually feels like the thoughts of a genuine person
i have one suggestion:
just a few more details about the fights
you mention the boyfriend calling the narrator worthless and that's about all
details would be great! violence always brings more to a story.. in my opinion anyway
great job! p.s. i'd appreciate it if you gave me some tips on my story too!
i loved it.. i'm glad that you're a prolific writer (haha, that's not me)
~TS

Is this a true story?
regardless, its good I hope you plan on divulging into more chapters, or even just one more...
either way its good, reminds me of someone
Anyways, Good Job
-Artemis S.

almost started crying. so damn true for all addictions...i can very much sympathize. very good. very, VERY good.

This was good. I like how you described the addiction and the subsequent pain he caused. You should expand on this.

This is really good. Lucky for me, I'm only addicted to Linkin Park and writing ;~) If I'd suggest doing anything, I'd give your addiction a name. Make him seem a little more real. Anyway, this is really good!

This is a really deep excerpt in a way, because that is what it seems like to me. An excerpt a chapter of a life. I like this. Nice job!

This is really good. Nice description of addiction in the beginning, and nice description of how you feel with "him". I liked it a lot!
Freedman