Even though what you posted is a few years old, I love it! It has a flow to it. Your characters are well developed and have life like personalities and behaviors. Sam and Ragi are very interesting. Your work feels like it is realistic, even though it is a fantasy work (and I did notice why). It is interesting that you don't have long descriptions or explanations, I think that's why I wish to read more.

I also remember you from , I enjoyed Collateral Damage.

I look forward to see what else you post here on fictionpress. I always respect and admire those who write well and edit their work before posting.

Very intriguing. Not to mention well crafted. I love reading a finely polished story; I think that attention to detail is what makes or breaks a short piece, and what you have posted here shines from it's own polishing! Your characters are vibrant, and their interactions feel comfortable and natural. I really look forward to reading more of this!