Wow! this was written by a nine year old? it was cute at first, and then, when i read it again, it was deep. You find life interesting, but its not your life. its make believe. living in a falsehood you think is real. Two thumbs up to your niece. She has great talent. Encourage her to keep writing. :)

wow. how sweet! of you, and of her. i like it, it has good imagery, and is increadably cute and sweet, in that random childlike way. give her my compliments.

This is so cute... That kid has some potential... I have seen older people on this site write just like her... tell her it's excellent...

I think this is actually VERY beautiful. I'm seriously going to maybe print this off if you give me permission to do that with some of your work. I bet she gets her talent from you.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on chapter 6.

This is so cute! It sounds like you niece is talking to a butterfly.

i wish i could write like you do ...hey i uploaded another poem go and read it right now or else

Very cryptic, and original. Great poem!

Neat. I like it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King