that was, cliche as it is, magical. that poem was really intense, and described things just wonderfully, it really did feel magical.

Very cool. Keep writing.

Ok, I just don't get this one at all. Are you burning or drowning? Or boiling yourself? Then I thought it could be both, like in Napalm or something but, no, you said 'water' so I'm very confused.

A little dark, but beautifully done..i love the reference to lace...very creative.