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FAKE?romances 2004-05-12 . chapter 1
'you're so complex/she's just a girl'.
that bit really got me...you are an awesome writer and i really loved this poem. very, veryy good job :)
The Paperback Mummy 2004-05-11 . chapter 1
Hm, I can relate to this too much. I liked the odd little details, like pink fingernails and sunsets making hair glow...this gets to go on my fave stories list! Yay! lol.
Miss Meticulous 2004-04-27 . chapter 1
Wow... this is awesome. It would be an awesome song... if it was adapted to a melody. And if it had a chorus... *grins* (Im a singer... I tend to think songs, not poems... hehehe) This almost kinda reminds me of the song 'There's your trouble' by the Dixie Chicks. It's pretty much the only song by them I like a lot. But this poem is really cool. I like the sad, wistful, and dreamer that is portrayed in this song, it reminds me of me sometimes. Nice job.
simpleplan13 2004-04-03 . chapter 1
so true i like the rain and sunset thing a lot
K. Lighter 2004-04-03 . chapter 1
Wow. I seriously like. I admit, I can relate. Other than the pink nails thing. My nails tend to be all bitten up despite failed efforts to let them grow so I can get them done again. Anywho, great stuff.
K.
Asthenia 2004-04-01 . chapter 1
Wow, thats great. I can totally relate. Although, my finger nails would be black...or blue...
Destroying Angel 2004-04-01 . chapter 1
How very... cheery?
A few capitalizations where there shouldn't be, otherwise it was a nice read.
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