you put into words just about what i feel.. you know.. you're right.. ** it. who needs guys like that anyway?

Most unfortunate that this is true, and can't be ignored. Great way to put it into words!

Yeah, you're right, but the thing is, that's more of a rant than a story or poem or whatever you wanna call it. You could put that in a plot and make this a sort of opening/prolouge or whatever.