Wow. Repeat: Wow. This is awesome! Goodness, there so much good stuff to choose from! The metaphor is used perfectly, and the cadence of the words truly helps bring out the emotion and thoughts. Great poem!
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Have a spectacular day!
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P.S. Heheheh - yeah, that was some interesting dialogue, wasn't it? ^^; I guess I was just in one of my bouncy/happy/let's-have-lots-of-fun mood. ^_^

Absolutly beautiful. Dreadfully honest and accurate, in a good way of course.
Once again, thanks for another GREAT poem.