A really fun read--great job with the rhyming!

clever idea. :D i liked it.

Wow excellent poem! You did great with the rhyming :)

Heyz!

Good job.. but I guess it's because I read the original version first that's why I like it better...

it sounds like one of those songs that teachs kids about numbers... :)

Very sweet and fun to read.

Keep up!

Luv,

~Mini Sweety

Cute. It felt like a nursery rhyme.