this is so funny. Me likes much, I do hope you get Dai un-dead like soon, but anyways, this is entertaining.

(I'm really bad at reviews)

Lan-sama: Entertaining. Honestly.
Yasashii thwacks him on the back of the head, conjuring a sudden wince and glare from the samurai: Stop being so damn bland! I know you're really a nice person, so stop acting!
Lan-sama: I am NOT acting!
Yasashii: Yes you are!
Lan-sama: Tch. What do you know any way?
Yasashii: I know a lot more than anyone else. I am your character after all, and thus am YOU.
Lan-sama: ...I'm a girl?
Sybil appears out of nowhere, taking her turn in swiping the silver topped swordsman: No, you idiot. You're two girls.
Deie: And a Kousun'Kunen.
Ruex: And a wanderer.
Ruckora: And a monk.
Flynt: And a ninja.
Hitoshi: And a theif.
Lan-sama: ...that's disturbing.
Yasashii: Onwards with the review. It was certainly entertaining, Kai-chan, and you managed to hold together a plot all the while.
Sybil: Yea. The whole Hakama thing was brilliant.
Deie, with a snicker: Don't you mean Hankama?
Lan-sama kicks him: Don't make fun of my spelling!
Hitoshi: I enjoyed the eccentric mix of all your origional characters. I heard rumors of Lan-sama perhaps stealing the notion and coming up with a humor ficette of his own, but... after his last small piece of 'work', I doubt humor would settle well with him.
Lan-sama: Yea... I was thinking of it... but that would be theivery to a degree. Taking your ideas and incorporating them into my own piece...
Hitoshi grins: Toldja you were a thief.
Lan-sama: Go die. I have some sulking to do. Once again, well done Kai-chan. I live off of your writings.
-The expressionless samurai regards his 'companions' for a moment, before stepping off elsewhere.-

I like the device you used to introduce the characters. I think some of it is a bit confusing. I'm having a hard time fixing characters with names, but otherwise its nice and funny.

^^ YAY! i read another of your fics. well. about half of it. you read a lot of it to me last ng=ight at the fair. ^^ its funy! ^^ bwee! good job!