Fuzzy,
hmm... i like a little, i dunno, im happy to see our style is a little different from other ppl, i read poetry from ten different ppl and i swear, id think they were from the same person...
btw ive surpassed your poetry, i gots 61 poems now, BOOM... and if you need an editor for ur short stories, i might be of assistance buddy, just email me...