WAYY too long. I was bored to tears, to be quite honest. Too much, too fast in the beginning. Try shortening the chapters up a bit next time.

Alright, I'm going to be honest. The original premise of this story is intriguing, but your stereotypical characters are, to be frank, grating. You're previous reviewers are right when they say it sounds like a typical teen girl, and that makes me cry. Keep up the good work.

I like this. It's told soo real like. I'm amazed by your writing !!
~ CBTD ~

Thanks for your review. No, I don't write any fan fiction.
Your story is interesting--keep writing!

Hey, savvy pirate here
cool story you've got going-- i like the style, it's really sounds like some teen girl going on about her life.
yeah, i do some fanfic, though i would like to do more... like lotr, hp, and potc. i have an account on fanfic.net "singukusa" but it's only got a lotr poem at the moment... so there you go. see 'ya!

i like it!

Hey u have got to finish this!! It's excellent so far - can't wait to find out what happens.

me like, me like a lot!

WOW...really good! Did u get som of ur ideas from the 'angus, thongs, and full frontal snogging' series? really good story!

Hey cool story. You're a pretty good writer. Hope u continue

Your actually a pretty good writer, I like this story much. The whole sex god thing threw me off, since down here "sex god" means you've actually "done-it" with the person but, anyway, yeah, update soon, and i shall continue to review.