Wow this is an excellent poem. Great descriptions, I enjoyed reading your work.

Rocky

hey, that was so great, in an odd kinda way. i'd give it a 15/10. no, that's not a typo. Til : )

I like it. It's simple, but there are so many underlying emotions... maybe I'm perceiving things that aren't there. I mean, 1:00 in the morning... it's hard to feel anything that late...

Thank you for such encouraging reviews on my stuff! You make me feel special. _

*glares in a friendly way*
You make me feel like such a bad writer with this, Jake!
I think that says what I think of this and all your other poems/stories.
-Rachel.

maybe she does exist...let me know if she has a friend?
*pohi today*
your irish lover

I don't quite understand this, but I still like the poem. Neat style
Nymph

nice use of quotes and format.

It's 3:28 A.M. and I am taking a study break...anyway, I'm kinda woozy, so this won't be the best review.
Liked the conversational approach
Loved the last line. Don't know why, it just kind of brought everything together into a nice package.

Aw, that's sweet!

think it might've been a tad more connected if it rhymed, but hey, that's just me
still good though

Aw are so fucking sweet. *kisses* I am so happy for any girl who marries you. (as long as I'm one of the bride's maids. CUZ IF I'M NOT...!)

Hehe, it's sweet. I like it.

I Love the ending. "Candid, Special, Mine." Hee Hee. Sorry, I'm odd. Anywho, I like how its a whole story in just a couple of lines. Its good.

nice
great job
i like this poem