|Reviews for My Downs|
| confwuzzled 4/19/05 . chapter 3
damn u, another gr8 1! i've g2g b/c i got 2 go 2 bed 2 get up 4 school, but i love u and ur poems, so keep on writing! YAY! lol.*-*confwuzzled*-*PS-i love the quote in ur bio: 'no one is a virgin, life screws us all' thats awesome!PPS-4 some weird reason i wanted 2 share w/u the word, Bangkok. hehe, i got that nickname in socials b/c we were doing a map on South Asia or something, and that word cracks me up so much! *repeats word 2 self* heheheheheheheh. lol. toodles!
| confwuzzled 4/19/05 . chapter 2
DAMMIT! okay, u cannot write a crappy ficcy, how is that possible? i've R&R like a million of ur ficcys tonight and EVERY SINGLE ONE IS INCREDIBLEY GOOD! how do u do it? I write like 10 poems and like 2 of them r good!*confwuzzled at how gr8 u r!*
| confwuzzled 4/19/05 . chapter 1
ANOTHER gr8 one, shit, u r so frekin awesome! how do u do it? ALL of ur ficcys are so damn good! YAY 4 u!confwuzzed
| Infection 4/4/05 . chapter 1
this is antoher good one!
| TaschaBear 12/30/04 . chapter 2
*sniff* That is so sad..." I love you master jake. I may not be able to carry the ring but, I CAN CARRY YOU!" *picks up jake*
GOOD JOB! Intersting that you feel this way...
| poetic abortion 12/22/04 . chapter 3
I liked this also. Well done !
| Amethyst Eyed Cynical One 12/15/04 . chapter 3
it.u have gr8 talent here.
| TaschaBear 12/1/04 . chapter 1
That is so sad..."WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU MAN!" (say man in german) Nicely written thou!
| Poetrybay 11/29/04 . chapter 3
my favorite part of this poem is my time I'm biding, Like a jail, i am trapped. If only lying. Would end my crying. I would be forever grateful, Exceptlying isn't quite easy. this is my favorite verse very well written
| Poetrybay 11/29/04 . chapter 2
nice piece of work i like this better
| Poetrybay 11/29/04 . chapter 1
good poem i got to say keep up the good work
| SeaVoi 11/25/04 . chapter 3
Way to be happy! I am sure that most people have felt this way, so yeah! Nicly put.
| redsage 11/24/04 . chapter 2
what can i say, you've done it again. you've brought out someting and im willing to read it out. all three poems made me feel that i'm not alone. although we might not have the same trouble, still the feeling is the same.
| Shinji Boi69 11/23/04 . chapter 2
dude. It's even depressing me. I am kinda slow like that but oh well.
| Bukowski Is 11/22/04 . chapter 1
Hmm...is this life? Fascinating, it really is. I truly don't mean to sound...boring. K, back to review...This provokes a lot of thought: What is truly worth it? What is the point of existance when it will all be over, eventually? When will it all be over? And will we even know when it is?