This is really nice, I really like the depth and meaning in it. I can't relate though, because I've never loved anyone that way. Good job!

Do you write music? Because if so, you should really consider making this into a song. This is really nice, I like the flow.

*Claps* Very good. I like it a lot.
-MKayla

hi anna, i'm in IT class at the mo, but its my last ever lesson so i'm reviewing your poems. This was really good. I liked it alot. Anyway I've gotta go.
Oh, will you please e-mail me and tell me whether your coming tomorrow morning, as its the last time you'll ever see me for a while. I'd appreciate the company! Get back to me as soon as you can!

great! I like the repitition and the way keep me close and kiss me deep are somehow mixe...i dunno how but the entire structure is lovely.

Uwaa, awesome poem! I love the repetitiveness of the coupe lines, and just how you wrote it in general. I mean... Hm. My reviews suck. But it really was good.

the line that struck me most was 'burn your heart into mine'. it's so wild, yet full of passion at the same time, this line.
i don't know what it is, but there's something missing. sorry, can't really say now. :s maybe it needs a line or two more. but that's my opinion.
all in all, it was good.
-love, enat

Wow! Thats pretty awesome! You've got some mad poetry skills there. I really liked the poem, it held such feeling in the verses, I love it when a poem can do that for you...
I'm going to try and read all of them eventualy, but right know I gotta get off the internet to do homework... so, yeah talk to ya later -k-
~Zonza
P.S Thanks for reviewing one of my own poems, I love hearing what others think... it helps...

Sad. Sounds like a person who can't get a boyfriend.
P.S Can you revuew the rest of my stuff?

I like the poem. It flows very well and I can even see it being a song..
I never heard about Asperger's Syndrome until I came across your website. I(t explains a lot of my life though. I researched Autism and recognized that I had some sort of mild Autism. Now I have a name for it. I would like to more about Aspergers.

This one doesn't sound as hopless as some of the others around here (everyone here seems to indulge in extreme angst. Brighten up, I say). Hope you get the person you wrote this of.