It's okay, but I don't like the rhyming thing and I hate love poems

Carrie, this is one of my favourite of your poems, just so you know, and considering your talent that's saying something.
Quick bit of CC:
1.
{She wondering whether her love’s worth believing,}
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It should be "She's wondering", right?
2.
{The love that girl has, that she has clumsily disguised}
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This line feels a little awkward to me. Have you tried "that girl has, which [she has / she's] clumsily disguised" ? Just a suggestion, and it may just be personal opinion in any case.
Favourite part:
{He watches the stars twinkle above his head,
And she takes that step closer, her cheeks burning red,
He smiles to himself, and his eyes close,
He moved just slightly, and the girl froze.}
Kudos and bluebells to you, Carrie.
-Jon
P.S. If any part of this review made no sense (or less than that), then please blame it on my only having 3 hours sleep in 60 hours... stupid head cold... *ignore me ramblings*

aw...thats SO sweet...poor girl...poor guy too...hm someone needs to be an intermediate...lol

Very cute! I like how it switched POV's, from girl to guy to girl to guy...very awesome.

This is sad...I need to cry, now. It's lovely, though, all bittersweet.

i luv it! its a great poem and yes the title does fit
review me sometime, too

amen amen amen to true and this is from a guy love it