Hey.

This was the first poem of yours I read and I really like it.

You get emotions across really well.

Juvi :)

PS: Would you mind reading some of my poetry ... :)? lol...

That was beautiful! You have so much talent honey!

This is nice man I like the rhyme scheme

This is a beatuful poem so full of emotion
just one thing never let anyone drive you insane because you have talent keep up the good writing
TTFN
Poem critic

Aww very good! I like it alot.
LiL Angel with Wings
Dreamer to Fly

Hey I see that you decided to ink down some words again. You said that my poem was good, but I really think you should be telling yourself that. This was really good. I'm really impressed. Then again I did say you're like a seasonal professional or something like that. Right? Anyway I hope you two work things out. Until then keep writing. I'll keep an eye out for more stories/poems. Great job. TTFN.