so far so good... i liked it...it was also a wake-up call to those young people out there who drink, run-away, etc...there are a few things i'd recommend, however...you know those scenes with kari and todd & lassi and max, you should write separate plays about just them alone...and describe more about the setting...let the audience see the characters as well...just a suggestion but you have to power to disregard it, of course...thanks for sharing and happy writing!