|Reviews for Can They See Me?|
| confwuzzled 4/28/05 . chapter 1
| Poetrybay 11/29/04 . chapter 1
i like your poem it smoke to me very good choice of words. keep up the good work
| Jojo 7/25/04 . chapter 1
This kind of confusion everyone feels. And I bathe in it! HA! (sry) Lovin the poetry. Oh, and I know Julia Laugesun. She was abuddy of mine at her old(er) middle school. She said you were a friend on her page on this site. Nice to speack to you! (laughs)
| Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 7/19/04 . chapter 1
*clicks on the 'Add story to my Favorite Stories list'*
| Gaki Toki 6/26/04 . chapter 1
Too bad you don't live at my school, they'd think your really cool...you could hang with us, we'd love you...We'd be your best friends if you let us! Cause (as Jak would say) We love Birdie and Thad! YAY! ( guestbook18/) and ( sdcrew13/)
| Audrey Portman 6/5/04 . chapter 1
very good; it's got a nice rhythm and rhyme to it :) (i have a friend who went through the same thing)
| Wrathful Diana 5/30/04 . chapter 1
Finally a poem with perfect rhyming and rhythm, I have no preference of style but this seemed to flow quite well
| Breaking Heart 5/27/04 . chapter 1
so,maybe the rhymes kinda threw me off of the main topic here.i had to re-read your summary for this to remember what it was meaning is not completely lost in the rhyming,but it was close.i think it was a light approach to being serious about something.
your irish lover
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/15/04 . chapter 1
oh, nice poem. yes yes...
| vanburen 5/1/04 . chapter 1
your use of rhyme makes it sound light, but the message is anything but. therefore, the contrast makes the meaning that much more clear. i applaud you.
| Amara Ryden 4/30/04 . chapter 1
great job. the beginning reminded me of my poem 'gossip' )
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 4/30/04 . chapter 1
I'm glad you wrote this. It's great, seriously is. Not many people right poems that have to do with being GLBT.
I myself wrote one on the feelings for a girl and got a flame. Anyway this is good.
| CrowBait 4/27/04 . chapter 1
Wow, I really like this poem! Props for the questions thing.
| Layla737 4/18/04 . chapter 1
having a close friend that's gay, this is something I can actually understand (cause I know him well and we talk about crap like this a lot)
| Pixie in a Birdcage 4/6/04 . chapter 1
Oh. It rhyms!