you shall always be alone except that my grandpappy will always be there to love you. oh and by the way he proposed to you last night

Wow. This was. . .amazing, really. I can relate to this one, on a lower level. I had a friend who almost commited suicide, I told a responsible adult. . .I saved her life, I guess. So. . .that's sort of how I see this. I really loved this poem, it was so from the heart.
A.Dee

I'm practically speechless...I've gone through what this pained being has and I wish that there was someone there to tell me to hang on...

sad poem- but good.

Truly gifted writing. This put all my thoughts and feelings into a moving piece of art.

Awe. I like that. I udnerstand some of that too.

THANK YOU. now i know that i'm not alone in my situation. about 3 of my best friends are suicidal. they've formed this self-mutilation cult, and there's nothing that i can do to stop it. of course i haven't written anything about it.. but thank you for doing it for me, in a way. :-) awesome piece.. keep up the good work!

This was a very sad and very well written piece. You write very well :).