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| Averon 2004-05-27 ch 8,  | abuseI couldn't find it! Why's you have to change the name? *sigh* Oh well. Excellent, as usual. All I got to say for now. Later Averon |
| evil-pillow 2004-05-23 ch 8, | abusei heard that sound that alex was singing on gth e radio! it was called one week or something like that! could you PAHLESE make the story a little longer? i wanna see alex and elara get to gether anf be come a couple than get married and then have little kids!*sigh* |
| ryuugitsune 2004-05-17 ch 8, | abusegood story good ending |
| Katala04 2004-05-14 ch 7, | abuseinteresting turn of events. so what's going to happen next? |
| ryuugitsune 2004-05-12 ch 7, | abuseyay kiss kiss continues |
| Averon 2004-05-08 ch 7, | abuseEveryone's hooked up now!! Wow, that was fast... @_@ I never knew so much could happen in such a short time... Still love it!! Averon |
| Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-05-07 ch 7, | abuseYay! it's workin' the way i wanted it to! hehehehehehe... i'm such a sad little girl... except... not so little... anyway, great chapter (yay! mark and taylor!), love the story lots, i'm sure i said that before, but i know with my stories i can't get enough of it, so hear it again! updates are good, and non-violence inducing (and no...that is so not a threat...ok... maybe it is... but you don't have to take it that way!) |
| Katala04 2004-05-04 ch 6, | abusekinda evil at some points but tis the way of life. Just be carefull of who you put who with. |
| Katala04 2004-05-04 ch 5, | abuseMaybe you should have him start with one and then go to the other. I like Alex the best. |
| Katala04 2004-05-04 ch 4, | abuseI like this chapter. It is a very interesting turn of events. And Mark is starting to get use to life, Yay! |
| Averon 2004-05-03 ch 6, anon. | abusePLEASE put Mark with Taylor? (is that a question?) He's so sad... I like Taylor, he deserves to have Mark love him, he's sweet... Gedemet and Eric seem to work to, so could they be together? (What can I say, yaoi fan through and through...) And Alex and Elara work... It would be nice for Mark and Taylor to get together, Tho, I think it would be more fun if it wasn't for a while and you tie there emotions in knots (^_^) I think I'm in love with this story... Keep it up! Averon |
| lookoverthere 2004-04-27 ch 6, anon. | abusewow definatly taylor |
| Averon 2004-04-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like this story! I hope you get Mark and Taylor to hook up, they would make a nice couple. I like the world you made for them, It's amazing. I'd like to live there, really... See ya Averon |
| Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-04-24 ch 5, | abusemark should so go for taylor! they've known each other longer. and i'm a yaoi fangirl, so mark and taylor! :-D great chapter! i love this story, it's great! elara should so go for alex... or alex for elara... that would be awesome. and walter should get someone better than that ** of a wife he had before... can't wait for the next update! |
| Nikerym 'Ksherea 2004-04-18 ch 4, | abuseyay! i'm glad that witch got what was coming to her. i really like the dad, too. great chapter (sorry 'bout not reveiwin' the other two, buti do sporadic reviewing...) i like your story much, as i do believe i said the last review, but it does not get any less true with repeating. update again soon please |