Reviews for Drowning In Air - FictionPress.com

poet tree 2005-05-21 ch 1,	abuseThat's sad. It's also less mystical/twisted than a lot of your other work...I like it a lot. Good job.
Will Heydt-Minor 2005-03-24 ch 1,	abuseHey, thanks for your kind review of the Iron Road to ADDMAT. I didn't have much time so I picked your shortest fiction story to read. Needless to say, I really enjoyed it. Your sentences are very well crafted, almost effortless. The duality of the dream in water and reality in air was interesting as well. You write like a poet, and I greatly respect that. The only thing I think needs to be changed is the word 'dead' in 'dead wife' in the last sentence. It just seems like it would resonate more if the reader momentarily lost track of her fate. Otherwise, it was a beautiful story. I hope to read more of your work in the future, and I ask you to please check out my other story. here it is: http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1866059
Teratoma 2004-06-17 ch 1,	abuseSuch a bittersweet story. Good job.
blackfire794 2004-04-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love swimming...rock on. Not so nice nightmare, but just "graphic" enough. Reminded me of titanic, just the setting though