Hm... really nice... reminds me of a poem I did hm, i wonder what happened to that poem... :x
I like this! Very well thought out, very good rhythm. Keep up the great work ancamna!
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Nice poem! I didn't realize you wrote it for your grandfather. I like it a lot. Reincarnation, right? That's what I see. I like the way you broke up the lines. It adds to the feel of the poem.
I miss you! I fyou get this, call or email me please. And thanx for reviewing my I poem. Yes, you know who the narrator is, but it's not really fair since I *told* you. ^_^