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I love the part about the purple monkeys not the elephants though I hate pink! BLAH.. GOOD JOB!LOVE YA BTW i HAVE THE poem posted Bright Eyes I just put that it was inspired by darkpaladin I didn't add the 13! Sry. Love ya,~Kaylee~ The bussions. Silk and Lace

good rhythm and flow, etc. etc. I feel like I never have anything new to say to you. :-\ But that's good cuz I likeyour stuff! I'd have to say that the intro is my favorite with the "pink elephants and purple monkeys" cuz it makes ppl like me go "what?" and pay attention, hehe. The chorus was very well written too, nice with the endings of the words and phrases. ^.^ *write on*

I love the beat to this! LOVE LOVE LOVE! Best pychotic song I have ever heard! (Thats a good pyschotic way not bad haha)

I love the line "Its about time I let my guitar rip." This is great...the trip is from a broken heart. Its funny how that twists you all up inside. If you have time, can you check out my lyrics for a song, "Iris weaved a Blue Scarf through my Hair," since your a songwriter. I'd appreciate your opinion.

I thik your reall ygood at writing songs...I mean talented...I envy...my friends think I'm a good singer so I sang some of your stuff to my own tune...Its great...like insanely...you could literally be a song writer...
ANNA

Very good, and I feel this way sometimes too! Love it. ;-)

Not bad. I like your other songs more, but I like this one too. Has a different feel to it.

Hey this is cool! You're really good at writing songs, I hope someday we can all hear them on the radio!

isnt all of life fake anyway? whats real? and if it isnt how do we know? and if it is, even then how do we know? were just one big tainted society.
loved it. great job

oh this is great... i can hear it in my head, but its probably not what you heard when you wrote it =P

...hehehehehehehe... man, this sounds like a kool song... wouldnt be suprised if this song was being played on the radio...

Awsome! I like the wording and I could here the tune... The emotion was definetly there.

thats very well put. i love it! i think its a really good song and cant wait to hear it on the radio one day :)

'pink elephants and purple monkeys'. lol i thot that was rather amusing. i liked the chorus best :) but then i was slightly confused by 'I' at the beginning becoming 'we' at the end of it. great job tho!